Nice trance music piece with efficient hypnotic mood!
The intro is interesting as it gradually brings new sonic elements unexpected in nature but still blending well and that conveys intently into its surrealistic ambience.
I noticed that at around 2 minute and at around 4 minute there’s a couple of sung syllables that pop out, which kind of distract from the experience.
Perhaps my monitoring environment isn’t optimal, but I also heard that on occasions some of the background vocals are slight slightly off the main vocal pitch. Perhaps that’s intentional, considering the grunge-sh vocal style used.
I would perhaps consider adding new musical ear candies or including a bridge of some kind as the song is getting a little lengthy.
All in all, I think it's a well crafted song and I quite liked it!
Please consider the above comments as uneducated profane impressions…
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